The Countdown by Ragavarshini Ragavan: U18 entry


                                                        The Countdown

                                                                                                By:Ragavarshini Ragavan

                                                                                                                          11 years old

Once upon a time, in the country side in USA , California there lived a girl named Lilly. She found a app called countdown. This app will tell that when will you die. She downloaded this app and it told that she had 10 hours , 25minutes , and 19 seconds to die. she was panicked.

After few hours it gave a reminder that she was going to die within few minutes. Five minutes before she died she would get tortured by the ghost. The ghost pulled her above the ceiling and killed her and threw her down dead. The girl’s friends came to know about it and the whole world also.

Few of her friends parents and her parents downloaded the app. It told 38 ,49,59 years to die. They got happy but the girl’s parents got shock as they lost her daughter. The girls friend’s Mike and Jame download it and mike’s app told 15 hours jame told 18 hours. That time Jame remembered of his brother. Mike and Jame waited and mike died. Jame told his friend Pipper to download the app and she downloaded it and it told her 19 hours. Then she thought her sister would have downloaded it. She panicked and ran to her sister and her sister told that the app told that she had 19 hours, but the little sister would die 5 minutes before her elder sister.

They went to a man who talks to ghost and the man heard of the incident from the people outside. The man told about the app and the story behind it that in ancient time a man went to an old person and told I am scared for the war what if I die. The old man told you have 3 hours and 15 minutes and 5 seconds to die. He got scared and sent his brother to war.

They won the war and came. The old man got angry and he created this app.

The man got an idea and he told them to make this star so you can delay 1 second of your death. They drew the star and they were safe. The ghost tricked Jame and came as his brother and he always get emotionally touched with his brother and when he stepped out the ghost killed Jame.

The elder sister ran and put a injection in her body which makes the ghost to disappear. She wrote to put injections in the arm to get her life back. The sister put the injection and got her life back. But now the ghost only can’t attack them so the world hear about this story so they interviewed  them and they told to put this medicine after put a another one. And the whole thanked her.


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